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		<title>Comment on Thanks for the Moby, Melville House! by Nicole R. Zimmerman</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/05/21/thanks-for-the-moby-melville-house/#comment-1657</link>
		<dc:creator>Nicole R. Zimmerman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 20 Jul 2010 02:50:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I just posted your hilarious video on my blog Paper-Pencil-Pen: Musings of a Fledgling Author. Yes, it&#039;s a free blog, and I even recently changed the template. hee hee</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I just posted your hilarious video on my blog Paper-Pencil-Pen: Musings of a Fledgling Author. Yes, it&#8217;s a free blog, and I even recently changed the template. hee hee</p>
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		<title>Comment on Videos by Joey May</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/videos/#comment-1621</link>
		<dc:creator>Joey May</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 23 Jun 2010 16:43:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>My ribs hurt from laughing. You nailed it. I&#039;m currently promoting a new screenplay and &#039;bumped&#039; into this video looking for marketing ideas. Great work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>My ribs hurt from laughing. You nailed it. I&#8217;m currently promoting a new screenplay and &#8216;bumped&#8217; into this video looking for marketing ideas. Great work.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Articles by John Royce</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/articles/#comment-1617</link>
		<dc:creator>John Royce</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 18 Jun 2010 13:33:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good article, Dennis. &quot;Suburban Dad&quot; lol. I wonder if you ever did a followup to it.

Loved your Book Launch video of course, it&#039;s excellent. Sad, painful and true. We&#039;re all learning how to make it in writing, maybe there isn&#039;t much of a way anymore. Could be the internet, teevee, video games, and apps changed the game too much.

Anyhow, thanks for your work ... I wish you phenomenal success!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good article, Dennis. &#8220;Suburban Dad&#8221; lol. I wonder if you ever did a followup to it.</p>
<p>Loved your Book Launch video of course, it&#8217;s excellent. Sad, painful and true. We&#8217;re all learning how to make it in writing, maybe there isn&#8217;t much of a way anymore. Could be the internet, teevee, video games, and apps changed the game too much.</p>
<p>Anyhow, thanks for your work &#8230; I wish you phenomenal success!</p>
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		<title>Comment on How Can I Help? by Griff Wigley</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/i-help-u/#comment-1615</link>
		<dc:creator>Griff Wigley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 10 Jun 2010 12:39:22 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for the inspiration, Dennis:

More belt-tightening: Northfield Police Dept. announces ‘Police yourself Thursdays’
http://locallygrownnorthfield.org/post/17856/</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for the inspiration, Dennis:</p>
<p>More belt-tightening: Northfield Police Dept. announces ‘Police yourself Thursdays’<br />
<a href="http://locallygrownnorthfield.org/post/17856/" rel="nofollow">http://locallygrownnorthfield.org/post/17856/</a></p>
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		<title>Comment on Dictated but Not Read: A Writer&#8217;s Perspective on Voice Recognition Software by Tom</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2009/12/22/dictated-but-not-read-a-writers-perspective-on-voice-recognition-software/#comment-1598</link>
		<dc:creator>Tom</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 29 May 2010 05:19:59 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for sharing your experiences with this software. I tried an early version of Dragon speech recognition about ten years ago, thought it a bit shaky, not sugary, but you&#039;ve sold me on the concept all over again. BTW, I found you by way of the Moby blog . . . thought your video was hilarious. Then again, a lot of people thought so. I also just ordered your book. Keep up the good work.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for sharing your experiences with this software. I tried an early version of Dragon speech recognition about ten years ago, thought it a bit shaky, not sugary, but you&#8217;ve sold me on the concept all over again. BTW, I found you by way of the Moby blog . . . thought your video was hilarious. Then again, a lot of people thought so. I also just ordered your book. Keep up the good work.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Thanks for the Moby, Melville House! by ruthseeley</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/05/21/thanks-for-the-moby-melville-house/#comment-1596</link>
		<dc:creator>ruthseeley</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Tue, 25 May 2010 18:49:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I have to stop watching your video as new lines crack me up every time. Congrats on the Moby and thanks for the blogging inspiration. P.S. Has Oprah called yet? ;)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I have to stop watching your video as new lines crack me up every time. Congrats on the Moby and thanks for the blogging inspiration. P.S. Has Oprah called yet? <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_wink.gif' alt=';)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Thanks for the Moby, Melville House! by Katherine</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/05/21/thanks-for-the-moby-melville-house/#comment-1593</link>
		<dc:creator>Katherine</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 22 May 2010 14:17:55 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congratulations!!!

Beating out a bunch of other people to win an award is one thing. Beating out Thomas Pynchon is definitely something else again.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations!!!</p>
<p>Beating out a bunch of other people to win an award is one thing. Beating out Thomas Pynchon is definitely something else again.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Thanks for the Moby, Melville House! by JES</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/05/21/thanks-for-the-moby-melville-house/#comment-1591</link>
		<dc:creator>JES</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 20:43:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congratulations -- well-deserved!

P.S. &lt;a href=&quot;http://papercuts.blogs.nytimes.com/2010/05/21/and-the-award-for-best-book-trailer-goes-to/&quot; rel=&quot;nofollow&quot;&gt;Mentioned&lt;/em&gt; in the NY Times too. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations &#8212; well-deserved!</p>
<p>P.S. <a href="http://papercuts.blogs.nytimes.com/2010/05/21/and-the-award-for-best-book-trailer-goes-to/" rel="nofollow">Mentioned in the NY Times too. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </a></p>
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		<title>Comment on Bio by Hope Tarr</title>
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		<dc:creator>Hope Tarr</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 18:21:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congratulations on your Moby. I was at the Awards last night and &quot;Book Launch 2.0&quot; was the hands-down show stealer for me. Thanks for making me laugh at my angsty self-promo pain and for being, dare I say it...awesome. :)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congratulations on your Moby. I was at the Awards last night and &#8220;Book Launch 2.0&#8243; was the hands-down show stealer for me. Thanks for making me laugh at my angsty self-promo pain and for being, dare I say it&#8230;awesome. <img src='http://s.wordpress.com/wp-includes/images/smilies/icon_smile.gif' alt=':)' class='wp-smiley' /> </p>
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		<title>Comment on Thanks for the Moby, Melville House! by Dennis Lang</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/05/21/thanks-for-the-moby-melville-house/#comment-1589</link>
		<dc:creator>Dennis Lang</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 16:58:48 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hey FANTASTIC!</description>
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		<title>Comment on Thanks for the Moby, Melville House! by Aaron</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/05/21/thanks-for-the-moby-melville-house/#comment-1588</link>
		<dc:creator>Aaron</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 21 May 2010 16:58:33 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Congrats, my friend!  

I&#039;ve heard good things about Inherent Vice though, have you read it?  The last Pynchon book I tried to read was V. and I didn&#039;t fare too well.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Congrats, my friend!  </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve heard good things about Inherent Vice though, have you read it?  The last Pynchon book I tried to read was V. and I didn&#8217;t fare too well.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Welcome Poets &amp; Writers by Jonathan</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/01/12/welcome-poets-writers/#comment-1581</link>
		<dc:creator>Jonathan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 14 May 2010 18:34:17 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I&#039;m attempting to write romance -- for cash hopefully. But there are a heap of boundaries I worry about crossing, especially because I am a dude writing under a female name, so I pussy-foot around what I think is appropriate for an audience of women. The best material however, seems to come from the most vile and audacious  plot and character twists, largely because I previously underestimated what conservatively minded women like to read in private. Once that fearless kind of flexibility begins to develop, the genre cuts much deeper than you ever imagined such trash was capable of.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I&#8217;m attempting to write romance &#8212; for cash hopefully. But there are a heap of boundaries I worry about crossing, especially because I am a dude writing under a female name, so I pussy-foot around what I think is appropriate for an audience of women. The best material however, seems to come from the most vile and audacious  plot and character twists, largely because I previously underestimated what conservatively minded women like to read in private. Once that fearless kind of flexibility begins to develop, the genre cuts much deeper than you ever imagined such trash was capable of.</p>
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		<title>Comment on This Is How You Do It #2 by Dennis Lang</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/03/18/this-is-how-you-do-it-2/#comment-1532</link>
		<dc:creator>Dennis Lang</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 22 Mar 2010 18:07:11 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>BRILLIANT!</description>
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		<title>Comment on How Can I Help? by Melissa McNallan</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/i-help-u/#comment-1527</link>
		<dc:creator>Melissa McNallan</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 17 Mar 2010 03:05:03 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Just wanted to let you know that I followed your advice on the grant application and did not request funding for sending the manuscript out. I later listened to those on the deciding panel say how unrealistic the amount of money was that one person was requesting to send it out (so glad I followed your advice). Even better - my proposal has been funded! Thank you!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Just wanted to let you know that I followed your advice on the grant application and did not request funding for sending the manuscript out. I later listened to those on the deciding panel say how unrealistic the amount of money was that one person was requesting to send it out (so glad I followed your advice). Even better &#8211; my proposal has been funded! Thank you!</p>
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		<title>Comment on Advertising and The New York Times Book Review by PE Harris</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2009/02/09/advertising-and-the-new-york-times-book-review/#comment-1507</link>
		<dc:creator>PE Harris</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 15 Feb 2010 18:03:32 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I can&#039;t find the link for placing an ad in the NY Times Book Review

can anybody help?</description>
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<p>can anybody help?</p>
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		<title>Comment on Awesome Writing Prompt #3 by Brian</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2008/12/12/awesome-writing-prompt-3/#comment-1496</link>
		<dc:creator>Brian</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 04 Feb 2010 00:48:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Wow it&#039;s not rabbit, may be rabbitsourus.</description>
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		<title>Comment on Seven Blog Posts I Didn&#8217;t Write in 2009 by denniscass</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/01/25/sevenblog-posts-i-didnt-write-in-2009/#comment-1491</link>
		<dc:creator>denniscass</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 23:22:34 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>All good points, sir. 

I think the author/publisher role may indeed be making a comeback. 

Perhaps a group of writers could form some kind of collective where they enforce mutually agreed upon standards, cross-promote their stuffs, etc. 

That could be pretty cool with the right people.

Still, there are a lot of headaches that a traditional publisher takes on. Not sure I&#039;m ready to abandon ship just yet.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>All good points, sir. </p>
<p>I think the author/publisher role may indeed be making a comeback. </p>
<p>Perhaps a group of writers could form some kind of collective where they enforce mutually agreed upon standards, cross-promote their stuffs, etc. </p>
<p>That could be pretty cool with the right people.</p>
<p>Still, there are a lot of headaches that a traditional publisher takes on. Not sure I&#8217;m ready to abandon ship just yet.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Dictated but Not Read: A Writer&#8217;s Perspective on Voice Recognition Software by Rob</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2009/12/22/dictated-but-not-read-a-writers-perspective-on-voice-recognition-software/#comment-1490</link>
		<dc:creator>Rob</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 29 Jan 2010 23:03:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Thanks for posting this.  I read your blog and noticed the post, then broke my arm and decided to buy a copy of MacSpeech. 

I&#039;m not sure what I&#039;d be doing if I hadn&#039;t known - probably experiencing a sore left arm and decreased productivity.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Thanks for posting this.  I read your blog and noticed the post, then broke my arm and decided to buy a copy of MacSpeech. </p>
<p>I&#8217;m not sure what I&#8217;d be doing if I hadn&#8217;t known &#8211; probably experiencing a sore left arm and decreased productivity.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Seven Blog Posts I Didn&#8217;t Write in 2009 by Charlie Fletcher</title>
		<link>http://denniscass.com/2010/01/25/sevenblog-posts-i-didnt-write-in-2009/#comment-1486</link>
		<dc:creator>Charlie Fletcher</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 25 Jan 2010 22:01:50 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Regarding your “unwritten” post on self-publishing, I would like to point out that publishing is something done by people with the means to do so.

Doesn&#039;t that sound silly? It&#039;s sort of a circular reference, isn&#039;t it? Back in the days of print, before there were electronic publishers, the only people who published were the people who have the means to reproduce their copy on some medium, such as paper or lambskin. When someone wanted to get something published, they had to appeal to the likes and dislikes of the publisher or have the means to hire someone to print it for them.

However, it&#039;s important to remember that the idea of getting a book published also embodies the process of getting the book distributed to people who will sell it. Today&#039;s book publishers often seem to have an inside track on book distribution.

With the advent of the World Wide Web, publishing has become electronic, which has thrown the whole distribution game wide open. Suddenly there are new players in the market hungry for electronic books to sell.

Nevertheless, what&#039;s really at the root of the stigma that is attached to “self-publishing”? Why does it so often seem to be regarded as low-quality publishing?Perhaps the big name publishers somehow promote that myth in order to further their own sales.

It&#039;s interesting to note that if you look back at some of the books we consider classics today, the authors were actually publishers themselves. Not only did they publish other people&#039;s works, but also their own. For some reason, some of these works are now considered classics. The question is, would they have been published at all if the authors had not also been the publishers?

My advice is to follow the example of these people: attempt to own the means of production whenever possible. If you know your market, this is the clearest path to success. If you can&#039;t own the means of production, at least know your market. If your access is blocked, find another way in.

After all, if you have a desire to say something that is truly important, isn&#039;t it better to get it into the hands of those who are truly interested in reading it?

Lastly, you may note in reading between the lines of what I&#039;ve said above, that I have omitted any reference to making money off of what you have written. Should you be willing to write for free?

If you understand your market, and your desire is to get something said, then it may be necessary to get it published without charging money for the work.

On the other hand, if your desire is to make money by working as a writer, it may be necessary for you to write about something other than your heart&#039;s desire. Again, if you understand your market, you can learn how to serve the needs of the market through your writing abilities.

Sometimes it&#039;s not possible to make money by writing about your heart&#039;s desire, but that does not mean that publishing the work yourself in order that people can read it makes it any less of an important work.

Do what you love, and the money will follow.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Regarding your “unwritten” post on self-publishing, I would like to point out that publishing is something done by people with the means to do so.</p>
<p>Doesn&#8217;t that sound silly? It&#8217;s sort of a circular reference, isn&#8217;t it? Back in the days of print, before there were electronic publishers, the only people who published were the people who have the means to reproduce their copy on some medium, such as paper or lambskin. When someone wanted to get something published, they had to appeal to the likes and dislikes of the publisher or have the means to hire someone to print it for them.</p>
<p>However, it&#8217;s important to remember that the idea of getting a book published also embodies the process of getting the book distributed to people who will sell it. Today&#8217;s book publishers often seem to have an inside track on book distribution.</p>
<p>With the advent of the World Wide Web, publishing has become electronic, which has thrown the whole distribution game wide open. Suddenly there are new players in the market hungry for electronic books to sell.</p>
<p>Nevertheless, what&#8217;s really at the root of the stigma that is attached to “self-publishing”? Why does it so often seem to be regarded as low-quality publishing?Perhaps the big name publishers somehow promote that myth in order to further their own sales.</p>
<p>It&#8217;s interesting to note that if you look back at some of the books we consider classics today, the authors were actually publishers themselves. Not only did they publish other people&#8217;s works, but also their own. For some reason, some of these works are now considered classics. The question is, would they have been published at all if the authors had not also been the publishers?</p>
<p>My advice is to follow the example of these people: attempt to own the means of production whenever possible. If you know your market, this is the clearest path to success. If you can&#8217;t own the means of production, at least know your market. If your access is blocked, find another way in.</p>
<p>After all, if you have a desire to say something that is truly important, isn&#8217;t it better to get it into the hands of those who are truly interested in reading it?</p>
<p>Lastly, you may note in reading between the lines of what I&#8217;ve said above, that I have omitted any reference to making money off of what you have written. Should you be willing to write for free?</p>
<p>If you understand your market, and your desire is to get something said, then it may be necessary to get it published without charging money for the work.</p>
<p>On the other hand, if your desire is to make money by working as a writer, it may be necessary for you to write about something other than your heart&#8217;s desire. Again, if you understand your market, you can learn how to serve the needs of the market through your writing abilities.</p>
<p>Sometimes it&#8217;s not possible to make money by writing about your heart&#8217;s desire, but that does not mean that publishing the work yourself in order that people can read it makes it any less of an important work.</p>
<p>Do what you love, and the money will follow.</p>
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		<title>Comment on Paragraph Technique: The Two-Line Reverse by denniscass</title>
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		<dc:creator>denniscass</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 20 Jan 2010 23:32:07 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Cat, you&#039;re right that the Surowiecki two-liner works especially well because of sentence structure and word choice. 

But he would have achieved the same basic aim with sloppier construction:

&lt;strong&gt;Debt didn’t get dangerously out of scale because of some flaw in the system. It got out of scale, in part, because the system was functioning for the most part as it was designed.&lt;/strong&gt;

The expectations busting is still there even if it doesn&#039;t crackle like the original.

This is why I argue that paragraphs are more important than sentences and words. A piece can survive half-assed writing if the paragraphs are strong.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Cat, you&#8217;re right that the Surowiecki two-liner works especially well because of sentence structure and word choice. </p>
<p>But he would have achieved the same basic aim with sloppier construction:</p>
<p><strong>Debt didn’t get dangerously out of scale because of some flaw in the system. It got out of scale, in part, because the system was functioning for the most part as it was designed.</strong></p>
<p>The expectations busting is still there even if it doesn&#8217;t crackle like the original.</p>
<p>This is why I argue that paragraphs are more important than sentences and words. A piece can survive half-assed writing if the paragraphs are strong.</p>
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