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What Are Your Tent-Pole Moments?

29 May

Wonderful Q & A in the A.V. Club with Up director Pete Docter. I’ve long been a fan of Pixar’s mighty storytelling abilities, and this interview delivers sweet, juicy insights into their process. Dig this:

AVC: How late in the process do you continue tweaking the story? Is it set in stone before you start animating it?

PD: Ideally, it’s set in stone. But the truth is—and every film’s different—basically the way we work is, we divide the film up into sequences, roughly 30 of them. And the ones we feel are tent-poles, holding the whole thing up, those go in first, and we start animating those. Hopefully, everything else starts to come along. It’s weird—on almost every film I’ve worked on, the first sequence we storyboard ends up being the first sequence that goes into animation, and ends up being almost shot-for-shot the same. In Toy Story, it was the Army-man sequence, which Joe Ranft mostly boarded, of these guys sneaking out and rappelling down to spy on the birthday party. It was almost shot-for-shot the way he boarded it. Same with this one. We had Peter Sohn, this really great story artist who’s doing the short film that’s gonna be attached on this one—he boarded the sequence with Carl where the nurses pull up and knock on his door, and he says “Just give me a moment,” and then he floats his house off into the sky. We had these poetic images of him floating past stores and windows, and that is almost shot-for-shot. Other sequences, we reworked 40, 50 times, it’s crazy. But you do what you have to do to get it right.

This idea of the tent-pole is super right-on. I’d also like to add that you need to know what your tent-poles are supposed to accomplish. In the aforementioned Toy Story example, the Army-man scene establishes that these toys are resourceful and capable. Without it, then Woody leaving the safety of Andy’s room to rescue Buzz would feel like a stretch. But thanks to that scene, you’re prepared for these toys to do the impossible.

Tent-poles in plot- or action-driven stories are essential, but even literary pursuits have them. (For some reason, the unsettling Dick & Jane opening to Toni Morrison’s THE BLUEST EYE springs to mind.) Ignore them at your peril.

Some homework for the weekend if you’re interested:

1. Clear your mind of desire, expectation, and what you’ve done in the past.

2. Taking only the premise of your project (no peeking at the thing-in-progress itself) make a list of tent-poles, jotting down a few quick notes on what said TP is supposed to achieve.

3. Set aside for 14.5 hours.

4. Compare your TP list with what you’ve done so far. Where are there gaps to fill? Where are you overstaying your welcome?

5. Take a nap or eat a hot fudge sundae.

6. Get to work.

Final note:

The TP list is different from an outline. Outlining is great, but you can also outline yourself into a corner. (I’ve also found that outlines can start to justify themselves, even if they’re wrong.)

The TP list is free of chronology. It only cares about weight. In baking there are all kinds of substitutes for eggs, but chocolate is irreplaceable.

Five Common Writing Mistakes That My Students Make That I Still Make (and You Probably Make Too)

2 Mar

Forgetting the basics

If you’re writing about a person, then can I please have their age? It may not seem important to you, but in my experience there’s a difference between an forty-year old skydiver and a five-year old skydiver.

Too much connective tissue

If the movies made writing more cinematic (visual scene-setting, jumps cuts, flashbacks, etc.) can you imagine what the Internet is doing to our sensibilities? The hyperlink has prepared your reader to make bold jumps in content, logic, etc. so you don’t have to hold their hand through every transition. As the old saying goes, the shortest NASCAR track is 0.526 miles long.

Being afraid of the big knife

I know from experience that it’s hard to make drastic cuts, but every first draft is probably 25% overweight, and you’re not going to get it down to size by tweaking and massaging. Sometimes working on your “craft” means acting like a butcher.

No risks

You are not a writer. You’re a riverboat gambler with ice water running through your veins. You bet big and you bet often, and you don’t care about your hand, or if you win or lose, because you can talk or shoot your way out of anything.

Thinking the point is having an insight or making an observation, as opposed to taking said insight or observation and putting into play so it bumps into and rubs up against other insights and observations.

Know what I mean?

Awesome Writing Prompt #5

3 Feb

Write a scene based on the following series of diagrams:

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What I Meant to Ask Was:

18 Jan

What is the most exciting, sunshine-happiness situation that technology creates for the artist and the arts?

(Sorry if things came off a little negative before.)

I’m going to say copy and paste. You use it so often that you don’t even realize you’re using it, but this simple operation also helps open up your thinking. Making interesting connections and strange associations is only a control-c/control-v away.

Awesome Writing Prompt #4

7 Jan

Write a short-short story from the point of view of the gilded presidential pitcher in the upper righthand corner of this photograph.

Saul Loeb  AFP/Getty Images

Saul Loeb AFP/Getty Images

If I Were An Editor . . .

15 Dec

I’d give this kid a shot based on this video alone:

The medium is video, but he thinks like a writer.

Awesome Writing Prompt #3

12 Dec

giant-rabbit

Write a scene in which, despite appearances, it is the rabbit that controls the man.

Awesome Writing Prompt #2

26 Nov

1. Draw a hand turkey.

2. Decorate your hand turkey to your liking.

3. Imbue your hand turkey with one of the four cardinal virtues (prudence, justice, restraint, courage) and one of the seven deadly sins (lust, gluttony, greed, sloth, wrath, envy, pride).

4. Send your hand turkey on a quest that takes him or her to multiple international locations.

5. Happy Thanksgiving!

I never thought I'd see Cairo again . . .

Next stop: Cairo!

The “10,000 Hours” Meme

17 Nov

In case you haven’t heard, Malcolm Gladwell has a new book out. It’s called Outliers and it’s about genius, success, and giving the world a new conversation starter. (The Guardian has a nice excerpt that will help you keep up with the intellectual Joneses . . . those f*cking Joneses.)

I haven’t read the Outliers yet, but I’ve already come across four or five reviews/excerpts/interviews that touch one of the book’s main ideas: time in the saddle is a best predictor of success. Mastery takes about 10,000 hours. Start young. Work hard. Reap rewards.

Is this idea true or merely true enough? Again, I haven’t read the book so I can’t judge. But I am curious to see if MG describes the nature of the work done during those 10,000 hours. Is the definition of work broad (research, daydreaming, procrastinating) or does the prize go to the Iron Butt who simply grinds it out?

In any case, watch for the number 10,000 to enter the national conversation. Personally, I was rooting for this guy:

10-grand-bill

Good Choice: The Filth and the Fury

10 Nov

I’ve been sick for the past few days, which means when I haven’t been sleeping I’ve been watching TV. Lots of TV. The Sex Pistols documentary The Filth and the Fury was paired with 24 Hour Party People on IFC this weekend and I watched them both twice. Facking brilliant!

I’d seen 24HPP before, but TFATF was new to me. I highly recommend it, especially in light of the recent post about primary source research. The trailer (see below) tries to sell you on punk rock sensationalism, but in reality this film is a nerd’s paradise of found footage, meticulous research, and curatorial choice. You don’t have to care a fig about the music or the subculture to appreciate (and learn from) TFATF’s artistry.

Director Julien Temple also gets huge marks for making one of the best creative choices I’ve seen in a documentary in years: Everyone who is interviewed for the film remains in shadow. All the surviving Sex Pistols participated in the doc, and while you see the silhouettes of their bodies and hear their voices, you never see their faces.

As a result you stay in period. It’s 1977. England is falling apart. Johnny Rotten is fresh and feral. The other guys are . . . well, other guys. (But at least they’re other guys who don’t ruin the mood by looking bloated and saggy.) Toward the end of the film you expect (and maybe even want) the light to finally come on so you can see them now. But it never happens. Nice.

It’s easy to get caught up in the Big Idea. But sometimes it’s small, brave choices like this one that make a piece gel in surprising ways. Next time you sit down to whatever you’re working on, look for an opportunity to make a choice like this. What can you take away? What might its absence add?

And now, ladies and gentlemen, the trailer for The Filth and the Fury:

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